TechnoSam's Character: Trevor Flume

[TechnoSam]

Name: Trevor Flume
Age:15
Gender:Male
Height: 5 Feet, 11 inches
Short background: Both of his parents died mysteriously when he was just two years old. He lives with foster parents now. He is not very open to new friends, but for the people who are his friends, he would die to protect.
Description:He has a lot of experience with computers, but is not as good with them as Jeremy is. He also knows martial arts.

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Class: Assassin

Weapon

Ice Whip (You can see it in the picture)
One handed
Level 4

POWER: 2-3 slash damage + 2 frost damage
RANGE: short range
BALANCE: 1-2
ABILITY: /
RELEASE
Shock
Effect: When unleashed inflicts target with the shock-curse (strong). Deals dx (where x is strength) + y (where y is spell power) electricity damage to target over 10 actions and reduces their speed and balance by 20%. Only once per mission, energy drops to 0.


Armor

Frost armor
Level 3

ARMOR: 1
ABILITY: /
ADVANTAGE: All incoming frost, heat and electricity damage is reduced by 1.
DISADVANTAGE: /

Items

First aid kid X3
Small potion
Small energy drink X2
Sunglasses

Skill:

Freeze Ray

POWER: /
RANGE: /
EFFECT: Chance to freeze enemy, slowing down its movement speed for easier attacks. Opponent's defense and speed - 1 for 2 actions. Value = 15 VS speed.
COST: 2 energy
COOLDOWN: 4 actions
Casttime: 1 action

Master Talent: Thief
+1 Inventory

Primary stats:

Health: 14
Energy: 3
Inventory: 4 (only 50% penalty due to passive ability of Assassin)
Accuracy: 2
Agility: 2
Strength: 3
Defense: 4
Skill Points: 1
Spell power: 1
Resistance: 1
Wisdom: 1
Crit rating: 0

Secondary stats:

First aid: 4
balance: 2
inspect item: 0
inspect magic: 0
inspect creature: 0
climb: 0
reflexes: 4
hide: 2
spot: 0
jump: 1
intimidate: 0
concentrate: 1
move quietly: 2
handle device: 3
swim: 0
charisma: 0
sense motive: 0
survival: 0
speed: 3
standing solid: 1
keen eye: 1 + 4 from sunglasses

[Railen]

You did forget a thing or two. You have to copy-paste the base stats of your class, an assassin in this case, and then add some points to them. You can put four more points into any of the primary stats, and six into any of the secondary ones. For an example about how a character profile looks, you can click on one of the already existing characters.

[TechnoSam]

Ok. I'm not sure how to edit my post, so anyway, I'll add the info here.

Health: 9
Energy: 1
Inventory: 2
Accuracy: 2
Agility: 2
Strength: 2
Defense: 3
Skill Points: 1
Spell power: 0
Resistance: 1

Health +2
Accuracy +1
Defense +1



First aid: 0
balance: 0
inspect item: 0
inspect magic: 0
inspect creature: 0
climb: 0
reflexes: 2
hide: 1
spot: 0
jump: 0
intimidate: 0
concentrate: 1
move quietly: 2
handle device: 1
swim: 0
charisma: 0
sense motive: 0
survival: 0
speed: 1
standing solid: 1
keen eye: 1

reflexes +1
hide +1
concentrate +1
move quietly +1
standing solid +1
keen eye +1


I listed the changes, but I also made then in the actual list. Also, I think the range needs to be changed to short range, which is just past melee. That would be realistic, right?
So if this gets approved, what's next?

[Railen]

Updated and approved. Next up, you can go around and join training matches, challenges, xana alerts or adventures in order to gain experience, gather carthage points, find better equipment and make friends.

[TechnoSam]

Cool! Thanks for all the help.

[Railen]

You gained a level and with that +2 handle device.

In addition, you get two new points for primary stats and four for secondary stats.

[TechnoSam]

Alright, so to add those points, I just edit the first post, right?

[Railen]

No, editting has been disabled in character creation, because otherwise everyone would be able to cheat. In order to add them, you just post where you'd like to have them and I'll add them for you.

[TechnoSam]

Alright, that makes sense.

I'll take +1 on Health and +1 on Energy.

+2 First aid
+1 Jump
+1 Reflexes

[Railen]

Done.

[Railen]

You gain a level and with that +1 inventory, plus two primary and four secondary stat points.

[TechnoSam]

Quick question. You mentioned spell power. What's that?
I see it in my stats, it's 0 of course. Would it be worth upgrading?

[Railen]

Upgrading it a little will help increase the frost damage you deal with your weapon, and it might be used in the future for certain items or skills. I wouldn't update it too high if I were you, since you'll mostly rely on strength, inventory, agility etc as an assassin, but it's your call.

The exact use of spell power is how strong your magic abilities are. Say you have 2 spell power, if you'd hit with your whip you'd deal d2+2 slash damage + d2 + 1 frost damage. (the first d2 is your strength, the second your spellpower. The first two is the bonus damage from your whip, the one is the bonus frost damage from your whip)

[TechnoSam]

I'll take +1 Spell Power and +1 Defense
+1 First aid
+1 Reflexes
+1 Speed
+1 Balance

How's that sound?

[Railen]

Updated-

How it sounds to me doesn't matter much, it's your character.

[Railen]

You gained a level, +1 wisdom and 2/4 points, plus w weapon release that you may design yourself and pm me/post here.

[TechnoSam]

Alright.
I'll take +1 Energy and +1 Strength.
+1 Balance
+1 Speed
+1 Hide
+1 First Aid

I'm not too familiar with weapon releases. What exactly is it?

And one final note. Something happened with the images of my character, and I can't edit the post (obviously). So if you would, could you edit the post and add the new images? The URL is below.

Code:

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[Railen]

A weapon release is a special ability/skill/effect your weapon has, very strong, but with some kind of cost or a high cooldown. While a weapon ability is passive and always working, you choose when to activate the weapon release, which is active.

[TechnoSam]

How about an electricity attack? It has a high chance to do a lot of damage to an opponent. I don't know what the downside of it would be.

Do you think that's a decent release?

[TechnoSam]

Actually, I think I might want to change that. I can't edit my post so...

How about some sort of shock that does damage over time?

[Railen]

Shock
Effect: When unleashed inflicts target with the shock-curse (strong). Deals dx (where x is strength) + y (where y is spell power) electricity damage to target over 10 actions and reduces their speed and balance by 20%.

Good?

[TechnoSam]

Sure. Sounds good to me!
Does it cost energy, or do I just use it and it has a long cool-down?

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