Replikas Signup

[CodeXanadu25]

This is a CLD(Code Lyoko Divergent) that splits after the episode Cold Sweat.Jeremie has just discovered that X.A.N.A has 896 replikas left that must be destroyed manually,and they decide they need more warriors.William rejoins the team and they all set out to find new Lyoko Warriors in a group of new students.Here are the stats for all major characters(they are only used in battle).

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Also,whoever gets Jeremie decides what his weapon,power,and outfits are.

Spoiler:

all OCs should have LP between 100 and 200,their Attack/Weapon between 5 and 200(has to be divisible by 5),and their Speed should be 1-10.I will either an OC,William,or Jeremie.Also,an OC can have 1-4 Attacks.

[CodeXanadu25]

Sorry for not knowing how to do a spoiler-box thingy.

[Atlas]

I'll fix it. You can just look at the code afterwards, and you'll learn.

[Eilorae]

Ok, I'm sorry but I've got a lot of issues with this format as of right now. But I'm also stuck on my phone so it is not going to look very nice. I'll try to be as detailed as I possibly can.

1) In the episode Cold Sweat, William is still under Xana's control. It would have to be a later episode or William not appearing at all inorder for your plot to make any sense. Along with the plot being messed up it also seems rushed. I see what the general idea is but I think that either some more information as in what happens, how they are going to recruit more people, how the decision was made to recruit more people after William, you get my point.

2) No rules, I know that this isn't huge but it is always nice to have some sort of guidelines. Without them I am seeing that I can post something like this: "Odd ran acros the qu4d. Yelling," lol u mad bro? L2p life dude, u jell? Ive gotz madz skilz bro!"" You get my point. There are other things that could be added to make it more enjoyable overall.

3. Your point system makes no sense. How come Jeremy, going to Lyoko for the first time has more Lifepoints than Ulrich or Yumi who have been over fifty times to Lyoko. Also why is Jeremy able to "nuke" down enemies in posts based on those high damage numbers, with no apparent drawback. Also with the attacks, you are saying Ulrich could only do a max of 35 damage when say William can do over 200 in a post. You have do description on how the attacks work, how the damage is done, or anything like that. From what I see, all you need is Jeremy, William, and Aelita to "nuke" everything down and it's over for Xana.

4. Custom Characters: I see no solid format for creation. Right now all I see are the stats that I've mentioned above. What prevents someone from maxing everything out and just faceroll Xana's monsters. Do I even needs a name for my own character? Could I be an escaped convict that finds Lyoko and decides to backstab the Lyoko warriors upon arrival? There are so many potential variables that could screw the roleplay over.

Sorry for my rant. But I like the idea and I want to see it successful. But win those mistakes I see it crashing and burning into a bunch of tiny pieces.

[CodeXanadu25]

Good point,I wasn't thinking about that.I guess William is just playable while possessed orsomething.I've always been under the impression the one of Ulrich's katanas did 25 damageper slash.And I'll edit the post to make it more specific.I'll also add more attacks and make them more specific.Sometimes I just dont think...

[Lyokofelinae]

What about their skills?

[CodeXanadu25]

What do you mean?

[Eilorae]

Maybe explain how the abilities work, like so. (This is from a Digimon RP site but it still gets my point across)
~[Finisher]Lights Double: She can make an exact clone that followers her move. She gains enormous speed while doing this. The two charge at the foe. She scratches the enemy once before retreating. Two seconds later the clone explodes for massive damage if the enemy is still right next to the clone. Less damage the farther you are away from the clone. Useable once per mission.

This is just one of my issues with spelling and grammar: Can you please watch the spacing in-between sentences and commas? Sorry small errors like that bug me.

[Sponsored content]