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Peace's Character: Jake Masterson

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Post by PeaceKeeper2014 Tue Jul 31, 2012 9:52 pm

Name: Jake Masterson
Age: 15
Gender: M
Current Status:
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Background: A smart, fast, and generally good person, Jake has kept himself calm, even when his life is on the line. Calm in combat, inventive, and strategic in a way, Jake has always been more on the strategic side of combat. Also, with the fact that he's strategic, he's a nerd in military tech and tactics. When the team is going Rambo the whole way, his instincts kick in and starts to take effect, yelling and ranting to keep the team together. In the real world, games are his way of things and so is technology. He's a military geek, a good person at heart, and has always been there for anyone, no matter what.

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Class: Ranger- Marksman

Traits:

Talents:
Marksman

Expert Ranger: Reduces penalty from long ranged weapons to 0 and increases accuracy for a medium ranged weapon by 5%.

Inventory:
0 Weapon Upgrades
0 Armor Upgrades
0 Skill Upgrades

Armor:
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Weapons:
Earth:
Lyoko:
Skills:
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Primary Stats:
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Secondary Stats:
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Post by Eilorae Wed Aug 01, 2012 10:34 am

Good first start but here are a few things that are wrong.

Weapon effect: this is gained through missions or through the shop if I remember correctly.

Here is the Skill Format:
Name of Skill
Level 1

Effect: What your skill does.
Cost: How much energy it takes to use the Skill
Casttime: How long it takes to use the Skill
Cooldown: How long till you can use the Skill again in a mission

Yours is a bit off, if you are doing a stat buff effect please give us numbers.

Other than that it looks good. Atlas should be around soon to give you trait s
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Post by Atlas Wed Aug 01, 2012 2:49 pm

The weapon effect is a unique part for this character, so I let it through.

Anyway, gone through it and fixed. Character approved.

Character updated. At level 1, you can pick any 1 of the following traits:

Honest
Diligent
Tenacious
Proud
Loyal
Faithful
Honorable
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Post by PeaceKeeper2014 Wed Aug 01, 2012 4:50 pm

I think I'll go with...... Faithful.
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Post by Eilorae Sun Oct 07, 2012 7:45 pm

Level up:
Received +1 to strength/hit (already added in)

You have 2 points for Primary stats and 2 for secondary. Please say how you want them distributed.

You also have a skill upgrade
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Post by PeaceKeeper2014 Thu Oct 11, 2012 3:01 am

Okay, I want 1 point going to Energy and 1 point going to Skill points.

I would like to up Parkour Element by 1.
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Post by Eilorae Tue Oct 16, 2012 8:11 am

Leveled up, you now have 2 primary and 4 secondary stats to distribute.
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