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I could use some help on fiction techniques, and I'm sure I'm not the only one. Come one and all to share your fiction expertise or gain some.
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Re: Original Fiction
You might want to start with exactly what kind of help you are looking for.
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Re: Original Fiction
Any kind would be of help. Description advice, action, anything. What I need help on mostly is individual scenes, the length. How much can you stretch description on a character/action before it loses suspense?
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Re: Original Fiction
My direct opinion on this. Taken right from my NaNo story.
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- A girl, most likely a freshman raised her hand then quickly got called on. “ I find that an outline is more hindering than helpful. The reason being that if you make an outline you are more likely to want to stick with that outline and if there is any issue with a certain area or chapter. You have to spend extra time on how to figure out how to get over that issue when you could spend the same exact time either moving on or editing grammar and such.”
There were a few muttered conversations, agreeing with the girl. But then a guy spoke up,“ but if you start without an outline, how would you know where to go? If you don’t have an outline then you would get lost within your own writing then having to end up going back re-reading half the piece then end up spending more time.”
Once again there were more quite conversations. After he finished speaking I took my turn,“ that’s true but I’m going on the side where an outline is more of a hindrance. The reason being, I find even if I figure out a decent outline I find that I end up not needing it. I wrote a novel in a month with a few friends. I decided to take the month before and make out just a general summary of the story. I ended up ignoring it the entire time. So I find that using that time is worthless. All you really need is your plot and the will to write.” I finished my little speech and there were a lot of little conversations.
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Re: Original Fiction
Here's a tip:
Anything that you've seen, like a movie or something, try to make it your own. Twist things you see in the world and make it your own in your own world. Call it what ever you want, but make sure to make it your own.
Make things that are based from your life, but also take that and morph it into something different, but special.
Anything that you've seen, like a movie or something, try to make it your own. Twist things you see in the world and make it your own in your own world. Call it what ever you want, but make sure to make it your own.
Make things that are based from your life, but also take that and morph it into something different, but special.
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Re: Original Fiction
Redng a lot can also help with writng. I thnk that just seeng how othr authrs have wrtten certn scnes can help you come up with new ideas...
Re: Original Fiction
Stella Luce 333 wrote:Redng a lot can also help with writng. I thnk that just seeng how othr authrs have wrtten certn scnes can help you come up with new ideas...
Couldn't agree more.
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Re: Original Fiction
Well without any specific query I can only offer vague and usually common sense advice.
The most basic idea you need to keep in mind when writing a story is focus on some theme or idea. I can't stress enough how important it is to have some kind of point to your writing. The point should be the thing that a person takes away from a story, and the rest of the writing should relate to this idea/theme in some way.
I'll link a poem that does this excellently. I'm sure you've probably seen it before, and I'll bold the "idea" that the poem revolves around:
In specific, the most important line would be "In proving foresight may be vain." The poem is wholly focused on all the preparations and plans the mouse made, only to have it washed away by something out of it's control. The whole poem was meant to convey how you can't plan for all the events that will happen and yada yada you get my point.
My point is that it had something it wanted to talk about, and each part of the writing complemented and gave context to that message.
The most basic idea you need to keep in mind when writing a story is focus on some theme or idea. I can't stress enough how important it is to have some kind of point to your writing. The point should be the thing that a person takes away from a story, and the rest of the writing should relate to this idea/theme in some way.
I'll link a poem that does this excellently. I'm sure you've probably seen it before, and I'll bold the "idea" that the poem revolves around:
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To A Mouse, By Roberts Burns
Standard English version, which admittedly loses a bit of its charm, but it'll be easier on you.
Small, crafty, cowering, timorous little beast,
O, what a panic is in your little breast!
You need not start away so hasty
With argumentative chatter!
I would be loath to run and chase you,
With murdering plough-staff.
I'm truly sorry man's dominion
Has broken Nature's social union,
And justifies that ill opinion
Which makes thee startle
At me, thy poor, earth born companion
And fellow mortal!
I doubt not, sometimes, but you may steal;
What then? Poor little beast, you must live!
An odd ear in twenty-four sheaves
Is a small request;
I will get a blessing with what is left,
And never miss it.
Your small house, too, in ruin!
Its feeble walls the winds are scattering!
And nothing now, to build a new one,
Of coarse grass green!
And bleak December's winds coming,
Both bitter and keen!
You saw the fields laid bare and wasted,
And weary winter coming fast,
And cozy here, beneath the blast,
You thought to dwell,
Till crash! the cruel plough passed
Out through your cell.
That small bit heap of leaves and stubble,
Has cost you many a weary nibble!
Now you are turned out, for all your trouble,
Without house or holding,
To endure the winter's sleety dribble,
And hoar-frost cold.
But little Mouse, you are not alone,
In proving foresight may be vain:
The best laid schemes of mice and men
Go often awry,
And leave us nothing but grief and pain,
For promised joy!
Still you are blest, compared with me!
The present only touches you:
But oh! I backward cast my eye,
On prospects dreary!
And forward, though I cannot see,
I guess and fear!
In specific, the most important line would be "In proving foresight may be vain." The poem is wholly focused on all the preparations and plans the mouse made, only to have it washed away by something out of it's control. The whole poem was meant to convey how you can't plan for all the events that will happen and yada yada you get my point.
My point is that it had something it wanted to talk about, and each part of the writing complemented and gave context to that message.
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Re: Original Fiction
As fun as it is to write lengthy character discriptions, I think that readers would get bored quickly (or at least, the people I know get bored with those)
Especially if it's a disliked character.
Especially if it's a disliked character.
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Re: Original Fiction
Pro Tip:
If you can't explain your basic plot to someone in less than a paragraph, you have too much stuff going on.
If you can't explain your basic plot to someone in less than a paragraph, you have too much stuff going on.
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Re: Original Fiction
That or you don't know how to explain it in one paragraph. Some really advanced fanfiction/stories need multiple paragraphs to explain what's going on in their story.Atlas501 wrote:Pro Tip:
If you can't explain your basic plot to someone in less than a paragraph, you have too much stuff going on.
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AeonFrodo wrote:That or you don't know how to explain it in one paragraph. Some really advanced fanfiction/stories need multiple paragraphs to explain what's going on in their story.Atlas501 wrote:Pro Tip:
If you can't explain your basic plot to someone in less than a paragraph, you have too much stuff going on.
But for the sake of most common purposes, one paragraph, or 3-5 sentences should suffice.
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