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Two full fics: Betrayal, Revenge, and the Rise of the New Order; The Others' Story
by cya6 Wed Dec 26, 2012 11:08 am
I was wondering which of these two people think I should update.
The Other's Story
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8191485/1/The-Others-Story
This one here I wrote for XaJuWriMo. I have an idea for a sequel planned but I don't know how many people would be interested...
Betrayal, Revenge, and the Rise of the New Order
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7549705/1/Betrayal-Revenge-and-the-Rise-of-the-New-Order
This is probably my first CL fic and my first finished fic. It's the only completed full length JerYumi in the CL archives, and I also have ideas for other New Order stories, but I don't know what people think...
The Other's Story
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8191485/1/The-Others-Story
This one here I wrote for XaJuWriMo. I have an idea for a sequel planned but I don't know how many people would be interested...
Betrayal, Revenge, and the Rise of the New Order
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7549705/1/Betrayal-Revenge-and-the-Rise-of-the-New-Order
This is probably my first CL fic and my first finished fic. It's the only completed full length JerYumi in the CL archives, and I also have ideas for other New Order stories, but I don't know what people think...
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Re: Two full fics: Betrayal, Revenge, and the Rise of the New Order; The Others' Story
by PeaceKeeper2014 Wed Dec 26, 2012 11:50 am
Sounds interesting. *Bolts for the link.* I'll check 'em out. 
They look promising.
They look promising.
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Re: Two full fics: Betrayal, Revenge, and the Rise of the New Order; The Others' Story
by cya6 Wed Dec 26, 2012 1:03 pm
If you could leave a review, just a few words, so that I know if anyone read them and their opinion, it would mean the world to me!
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Re: Two full fics: Betrayal, Revenge, and the Rise of the New Order; The Others' Story
by Neron641 Wed Mar 06, 2013 5:13 am
Well Cya you definitely know which one I' like for you to continue.
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Re: Two full fics: Betrayal, Revenge, and the Rise of the New Order; The Others' Story
by Stella Luce 333 Tue Mar 19, 2013 7:36 am
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- Hiroki: Milly, Tamiya and I have been talking. She's been telling me how much legal stuff I'm gonna need on Earth, once I get here, and how difficult that's gonna be. She's not sure how much we can get it to fly, pretending that I've been here all along.
Milly: Oh?
Hiroki: So, we've been talking, and she wondered if we could create a sort of mental altercation that would create a role for me in your world. False memories, birth certificate, that sorta thing.
Milly was quiet, thinking about it.
Milly: It seems impossibly difficult.
Hiroki: It actually wouldn't be. Because here's the thing. Once this is implanted it becomes fact. Even if the paperwork isn't perfect, it won't matter, because they have their memories, which is the strongest thing. Even if we're not 100% thorough, they have enough memories that they'll just attribute it to memory loss. Not to mention, we have the programs. It'll be tough, but very permanent.
Milly: I'm willing to give it a shot! At least we have a concrete plan! And I was also looking through the polymorph program. It's heavily based off the first polymorph created by X.A.N.A., which is, I think, one of Yumi Ishyama. Since you're Japanese, won't this help?
Hiroki: I think so. Although, even after we change it, I'll possibly bear a slight resemblance to her.
Milly stared at this for a minute, an idea working its way into her head. Suddenly, she typed back,
Milly: Hiroki, which would be easier, to program a false memory into Ulrich's group, or a normal person?
Hiroki: Hmm, interesting question. I believe it would be easier to implant false memories into someone in Ulrich's group than someone else, due to the fact that they've already had their memories modified a lot.
Milly: So, perhaps it would be better to insert you in a role that relies heavily on them. Say… a sibling?
Hiroki: …. What are you getting at?
Milly: I'm saying: I think that your role on Earth should be as Yumi's 'brother'. You're already gonna look like her and share some DNA, because your physical form is based off of a clone of hers. It would be easiest to give her memories because of the fact that her mind's been modified before. It also would be easy to keep an eye on your 'family life', because they live so close to the school. If any legal problems start to crop up, we can catch it before it becomes a big deal. It's a perfect solution!
Hiroki: … wow. That might actually work! That might work! Actually, I think it will!
Milly grinned. They had a plan. They had the methods. This would actually work!
Honestly, I think you’ll have plenty of interest for any story you write! You really know how to pull your readers into your story!
If I had to pick one over the other, I think I’d have to vote for The Others’ Story. The ending just feels a little more open for a sequel than Betrayal (but that’s just me). I also love how you’ve explained Hiroki’s absence from the first season!
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