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Spirit Warriors: Hooked on Aquiline

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Post by SMARTAgentKC Sun Jun 10, 2012 12:30 am

This is my story I've come up with recently It's going to be the novel that I write for the Xajuwrimo event that is happening now. I would like people to help me on grammar mostly as that is my major weakspot.

Chapter 1:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qkHDoVAXtWNjZ0kRY12g-Z-IDvHAQJ5RYN_Nndh0cVI/edit


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