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Tempting Things [OddxAelita]

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Post by Soul Jelly Sun Feb 19, 2012 7:43 am

S'up, everyone.

I present to you the OddxAelita fic I've been working on, Tempting Things. This is the first instalment of what will be an eleven-part story (I think). Quick one line summary is thus:

"The former Team Lyoko move on. As the cracks begin to show in Jérémie and Aelita's relationship, Aelita seeks solace in the arms of one Odd Della Robbia."

Longer summary: (EDIT - I ended up changing a few fundamental points whilst writing, so to save myself any embarrassment over missed plot points, etc. I'm just gonna cut this out. Razz)

[Placeholder for my self-indulgent 'comments plz' notes and whatever else I put here and accidentally deleted when making the edit.]
EDIT again - deleted the link, whoops! Here we go.


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Post by Atlas Sun Feb 19, 2012 2:16 pm

It's about time people started spreading their O X A propoganda.

I'll give it a look when I can. And please, write for your own amusement, not for validation.
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Post by Soul Jelly Sun Feb 19, 2012 5:01 pm

Oh don't worry, I wouldn't be writing if not primarily for myself. But as ever, I seek to improve, and I cannot be an objective judge of my own works.

In short, I was joking, but I do like really feedback.

And cheers.
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Post by Adventurer411 Wed Feb 22, 2012 3:10 pm

Why? WHY DID YOU SINK JA? YOU CAUSE ME AGONY.
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Post by K.F. (Kid Flash) Thu Apr 12, 2012 1:31 am

I have feeling that this will become Vena's favorite story on the site. ^-^
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Post by Eilorae Thu Apr 12, 2012 12:47 pm

Adventurer411 wrote:Why? WHY DID YOU SINK JA? YOU CAUSE ME AGONY.

NNOOOOOO!

@Odd- No more Ox Ry stories for you if you keep that up!
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Post by K.F. (Kid Flash) Thu Apr 12, 2012 3:21 pm

Ah all is cool. I play for a new team now... Razz
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