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The Four Chains

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Post by Adventurer411 Sun Jan 15, 2012 2:02 pm

Check it out, plz. Criticism would be helpful.

Link!

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2990875/1/Four_Chains

I'll post when the next chapter comes.


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Character Sheet
Health::
The Four Chains Left_bar_bleue20/20The Four Chains Empty_bar_bleue  (20/20)
Energy::
The Four Chains Left_bar_bleue3/3The Four Chains Empty_bar_bleue  (3/3)
Experience::
The Four Chains Left_bar_bleue0/0The Four Chains Empty_bar_bleue  (0/0)

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Post by aelitaxwilliam Sun Jan 15, 2012 4:26 pm

Ooh, I'm interested. Razz You should post more!
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The Four Chains Left_bar_bleue14/18The Four Chains Empty_bar_bleue  (14/18)
Energy::
The Four Chains Left_bar_bleue4/5The Four Chains Empty_bar_bleue  (4/5)
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The Four Chains Left_bar_bleue0/0The Four Chains Empty_bar_bleue  (0/0)

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